For our CIP today we were working on what we could to help the All blacks get back to the first title and what happened to them and why is there players leaving their own team behind so what we did was right what we know and what we don't know for the first so we write what we found out and I write was why did Jonah Loum die and I just found out he had a kidney disease.
Thank you
Hi Loloma
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing the research you did today. I want you to take another look at your introduction as some of it is confusing. By re-reading and doing some editing I think you can make your learning more clear.
- Miss Birtch