One day I went out by myself to go camp and I got lost in the forest and I was lonely by myself standing their by myself. I was walking around and it was getting dark and I was getting chills down my span so I started to looking for some kind house around the forest and I found it was pretty and looked clean. I went inside and their was a heap of food in the in the cardboard so I started to eat because I was hungry and then I went to the master bed room and slept until Someone came knocking on the door and I opened it and their was and boy just standing their looking awkwardly at me and said do live here I said yes to him. He came in said are you sure because I rent this and I was like oh I am sorry I gotta leave now because I remember that I only rent for four days to stay here okay bye thanks for reminding okay bye. But he pulled and said where you going. I was shocked but said let go of me but I was too late he put something that cover my mouth and I dozed off. I woke out in the forest again with a blanket ................ TOO BE CONTINUED.
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